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A Translation of "Night Moves" (1976), Bob Seger
by Keith M Ellis
‘Wasn't it great in 1962 to be young and fucking? Me and that girl I didn't much like, the one with the great tits. Fucking in my car, the backroom, wherever. We'd fuck in the alley! Mosty we fucked in the woods. And in my car, a 1960 Ford. Fucking at night in the summer. Those were the days.’
* * *The asterisks really sell it. —ed.
Addendum: The Source Material
I was a little too tall; could've used a few pounds
Tight pants points, hardly renowned.*The damn lyrics are so fucking long. The song is fucking long. I'm older than he was when the song was written and I fear I may eventually die before it ends. —ed.
She was a black-haired beauty with big, dark eyes.
And points of her own, sittin' way up high.
Way up firm and high...
Out past the cornfields where the woods got heavy,
Out in the back seat of my '60 Chevy.*...goes off the rails in several ways, not just in songwriting. —ed.
Workin' on mysteries without any clues
Workin' on our night moves
Tryin' to make some
front page, drive-in news
Workin' on our night moves
In the summertime
Umm, in the sweet summertime
We weren't in love oh no, far from it,
We weren't searchin' for some pie in the sky summit
We were just young and restless and bored
...livin' by the sword.
And we'd steal away every chance we could
To the backroom, to the alley or the trusty woods
I used her, she used me, but neither one cared
....we were gettin' our share.
Workin' on our night moves
Tryin' to lose the awkward teenage blues
Workin' on our night moves
Mmm, and it was summertime
Mmm...sweet, summertime
summertime
Oh, wonderin'
Felt the lightning, yeah
And I waited on the thunder
...waited on the thunder
I woke last night to the sound of thunder*I am convinced, truly, that he heard the sound of thunder. —ed.
How far off I sat and wondered?
Started hummin' a song from 1962
Ain't it funny how the night moves?
When you just don't seem to have as much to lose?
Strange how the night moves
With autumn closin' in
Mmm, night moves, mmm
[night moves]*The choice of '[night moves]' as a transcription of the background chorus grates on me because it's not even amusingly annoying. —ed. night moves
[night moves] yeah
[night moves] I remember
[night moves] ah, I sure remember the night moves
[night moves] ain't it funny how you remember?
[night moves] funny how you remember
[night moves] I remember, I remember, I remember, I remember
[night moves] oh, oh, oh we were workin', workin' and practicin' [night moves] workin' and practicin'[night moves]oh,onthenightmovesnightmovesNightmovesoh[night moves]Iremember
Yeahyeahyeah, I remember*And it doesn't go completely off the rails until the end where he, apparently, was doing whippets between takes. —ed.
[night moves] ooo [night moves]
I remember,
Lord I remember,
Lord I remember
!Night moves!
ha, ha, ooh-hoo
Oh, yeah, yeah, yeah
Uh huh, uh huh
I remember,
I remember
I remember
I remember
I*The rambling, fading out is also the mind coming unmoored just before unconsciousness. —ed.